July 2008  Issue #5
Carline Anglade-Cole CopyStar E-Zine
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How to overcome fear
and write copy that ROCKS!
 
Hi CopyStar,
 
Dan G. writes:
Hi Carline,
 
Love your newsletter. Since you asked for feedback, here's my 2 cents...
 
I've read several articles of yours dealing with that little negative voice telling you that you suck as a copywriter, etc.  I've gotten a lot out of how you handle that... and it's also nice to know I'm not the only one suffering from this.
 
I would like to read more about how you deal with this.
 
Anyhoo... thanks for the newsletter.  You're an inspiration. Lots of respect!
 
All the best,
Dan
What Dan?
 
You think successful, A-list copywriters experience negative emotions?
 
Moi?
 
You betcha, dude!
 
In fact, just about every top level copywriter I've ever spoken to has to overcome those little voices that say, "You suck". Here are a few tips I use regularly and believe me - they work!
 Carline Anglade-ColeEmbrace the fear!Carline Anglade-Cole 
Face it: Fear is a good motivator.

I fear being homeless, so I get up to work every day. I fear the law of gravity, so I don't jump out of 5-story buildings.

So, fear of failure can also motivate you to success. Next time the negative tape kicks in, try this:

Go ahead and let that tape play. But this time, listen to it like a typical teenager - arms crossed, head bobbing from side to side and rolling your eyes. In other words, with ATTITUDE!

When the tape is over, say, "Ok, are you done? Because I'm going to prove you wrong...Wrong...WRONG!"

If you already have a successful promotion, find it and re-read it. Then ask yourself: "Hey, who wrote this killer copy? Oh, yeah, I DID - and I can do it again!"

Then get your butt in gear and move on to ...


 Carline Anglade-ColeBaby step your way to success!Carline Anglade-Cole 

If the project overwhelms you, then set some small goals. For example...

Day 1: Just open the start kit box and peek inside. Don't take out the contents. Just see if anything immediately grabs your attention. If not, that's ok. You've accomplished your goal for the day.

Day 2: Remove contents and organize your material.

Day 3: Read just one thing. After that, stop. If you're starting to get excited, then go ahead - you can read another thing ... and another ... get the picture?

Baby steps help you break down a large, overwhelming job into small, manageable tasks. If you're an organized person, then schedule out the project. For example ...

By week 1: I plan to write an outline.

By week 2: I will work on sidebars.

Me? I'm more of an eclectic writer - I just start reading and when I get an "aha" moment - you know, when you read something that just grabs your attention - I type up my thoughts on the computer. For example ... 

... I worked on a project for a major health mailer for a book on diabetes. As I read the book, I typed up interesting factoids and bullets. I also jotted notes for possible sidebars and came up with three potential headlines.

By the time I finished reading the book, I had the guts of the package already written. All I needed to do was organize my thoughts, add some additional connective paragraphs, fine tune the copy and finalize the sucker!

A project that originally overwhelmed me was now painlessly completed!

And several times throughout the reading process, I purposely took the time to ...
 Carline Anglade-ColeDream ... Dream ... DREAM!Carline Anglade-Cole 

I would read about 30 pages of the book, and then take one of many fantasy breaks. Imagine this:

Your client calls you on the phone and says, "Carline (YOUR name goes here, by the way) we LOVE the package! We think it's killer copy and we love working with you!"

Then imagine so many royalty checks coming in the mail that you have to buy a mailbox the size of a Bull Mastiff dog house to handle all that moolah! (Ok, - I said FANTASIZE!)

Now, as you reach your daily or weekly goals, make sure to ... 

 Carline Anglade-ColeReward yourself often!Carline Anglade-Cole 

In other words, treat yourself with presents!

Daily goal rewards should be small. For me, it's a scoop (or three) of Baskin Robbins Pralines 'n Cream ice cream. Edy's Sundae Cone flavor is a close second.

Weekly goals can be a manicure ... movie matinee ... shopping at Wal-Mart with my 97-year old grandmother - whatever! These treats always motivate me to finish up a sidebar or premium copy.

In no time flat, you're wrapping up your first draft. But before you turn in the copy - make sure you follow this very important step: 

 Carline Anglade-ColeIncubate ... and then kill your babies!Carline Anglade-Cole 

Put away the copy for a few days. This is what I call the copy incubation period. Don't even look at your copy. Give your mind and creative juices a break.

Then, pick up the copy and read it like you've never seen it before. Pretend you're the recipient of that mailing piece. Since most writers treat their words like babies, this is the time to kill your babies!

Red line any unnecessary words. For example, "that" is probably one of the most overused and unnecessary words in the English language. Kill it whenever possible!

Mark areas in the copy where you laugh ... cry ... or even yawn. Watch out for double meanings that can sabotage your copy. Fix areas where copy flow is interrupted. And make sure to ask yourself, "Will this make sense to my reader?"

After you've finished this editing stage, you're ready to send your masterpiece off to your client!

And if you've followed the basic rules of copywriting... developed your theme properly... talked "to" your reader instead of "at" him... presented him with an offer he couldn't refuse... 

... Then you're well on your way to your next killer control!
 Carline Anglade-ColeCopywriting Boot Camp on
Steroids update
Carline Anglade-Cole 

Things are moving along as we put together our first-ever Boot Camp on Steroids. My Conference Coordinator, Miriam Saccomani, has been phenomenal helping me plan this event. So, let me give her a shout out right now:
 
THANKS, Miriam "Smack yo mommie"!

Hey, and I can tell you another thing: The folks who have already signed up are definitely not shy at telling me what they want to get out of this boot camp: personal mentoring!
 
So that's exactly what you'll get! In addition to me walking you through my entire copywriting process - learning how to create killer headlines...finding the "hook" of your package...creating killer sidebars...choosing the best testimonials... honing in on the offer...and going for the close...
 
I'm also carving out some serious 1-on-1 face time to help each and every one of YOU with YOUR biggest copywriting challenges! Phew! I think I'm going to be exhausted when it's over - but it'll be well worth it for you - and me too. Why?
 
Because I'm hoping to find one (or 3 or so) future copy cubs who can help me with upcoming projects! Meeting you face to face at the boot camp and seeing how you work - and take crits - gives me a great opportunity to know if I want to work with you in the future! So this 1-on-1 mentoring thing will be a win-win situation!
 
          If you haven't signed up for the boot camp yet - why the heck not?

Remember, this is your one-and-only chance to attend this first-ever boot camp!

Even though Miriam is a great help - this seminar biz takes a lot of time and work! So I'm pretty sure this will be a never repeated event! I guess I've gotten lazy just sitting on my butt in my office writing copy - and collecting my royalty checks! I like that lifestyle - I don't want to go back to "work" ever again!
 
By the way, I've gotten several requests from readers asking for a monthly payment plan to pay the Boot Camp fee.  If a lump sum payment is preventing you from attending this event - send me an email at carlinecole@bellsouth.net and we'll work it out!
 
There's a handful of seats still available - and once they're gone - THAT'S IT! So invest in yourself - and make the decision today to boost your copywriting skills to new heights! I promise to do my part to help you at the Boot Camp on Steroids! Click Here!
Until next time,
 
Yours for stellar results,

Carline

Carline Anglade-Cole
Million-Dollar Copywriter & Consultant

P.S. Boot Camp attendees are telling me they want to learn more about writing landing page copy for the web - so I'm putting it on the itinerary! What else do you want me to help you with? There's still time - so speak up now. Drop me a line at carlinecole@bellsouth.net.  
 
Remember, this Boot Camp on Steroids is for YOU! My job is to help you become a better, stronger and more profitable writer! Your job is to show up and soak in my 20+ years of experience - and then STEAL my winning secrets! I can't wait to meetcha - it's going to be a BLAST! And don't forget - we'll be hanging out with Clayton Makepeace, too! Woo hoo!  Click Here! 

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