July 2010  Issue #35
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Anatomy of a Kick-Butt Control

How to get 2... 3... even 5 new sales copy - for the price of ONE!
 
Hiya CopyStar,
 

My clients shell out $25,000 for me to write them a sales promotion package. But my smart clients can get 2... 3... even 5 new promotions for the same price. How?

 

By giving me the freedom to create multiple cover tests!

 

Cover tests are awesome. They allow you to change the entire look and feel of your sales promotion on the cover only.

 

That means you can test different headlines and cover designs for just pennies on the dollar. But the better news is:

 

The copywriter and the client get more chances for a winner!

 

Why put all your creative eggs in one basket - hoping YOU picked the winning headline and cover? Let YOUR MARKET decide - with cover tests!

 

Here's an example of how one of my smart clients got a big bang from his creative buck...

 

A while ago, I worked on a health promotion for an oral chelation product. We tested 4 different headlines:

 

#1: The Ultimate Pac Man for Your Arteries

 

#2: Now you can REMOVE and SEE the plaque that was clogging your arteries!

 

#3: The New Chelation Miracle

 

#4: Meet the folks who said, "Bye Bye Bypass!"

 

So, which headline won?

 

If you picked #3 - you're a pretty smart cookie!

 

That was the strongest headline and the official new control - meaning it was the headline my client used to mail to his lists of prospective customers. But...

 

... Headline #2 and #4 were also strong - coming in less than a percentage point from the winner. In other words...

 

... My client did not have 1 - but 3 new successful covers! He could rotate mailing these covers to his prospect mailing list and fight response fatigue. So the package stays fresher in the mail LONGER!

 

In fact, that chelation package mailed for over 2 years - using the 3 covers!

 

So you can see why the client is happy. He doesn't have to shell out more moolah for a new package. And for l'il ole me -  the copywriter - multiple cover tests mean a longer and steadier flow of royalty income! Now, that's what I call a "win-win!"

 

This is the same client who's given me up to 5 test panels for every new package I create for him! I just LOVE him - and his savvy marketing mind! Here's why...

 

Many, MANY times, if I had to pick only one of those 5 tests to choose, I would've picked the WRONG one! Here's a perfect example:

 

For a launch of a probiotic product, we mailed the following 5 test panels:

 

#1: When you poop, do you need a ...

[photo of a plunger] to unstop clogged bowels ...

[photo of a vice] to tighten up loose bowels ...

[photo of a gas mask] to keep from passing out afterwards

 

#2: The Big, Huge Yogurt Hoax [an exposé on yogurt]

 

#3: Unclog your colon! [with a before and after graphic shot of what a filthy and clean colon looks like]

 

#4: Why suffer? Now you can put an end to embarrassing gas ...bloating ... constipation ...heartburn ...diarrhea ...irritable bowels ...and other digestive problems [with photos of folks experiencing digestive problems]

 

#5: When your intestines go from: [photo of the Sahara desert] To this: [photo of Ireland's green pasture] You can put an end to your worst digestion problems in record time.

 

So which cover won?

 

Let me tell you this first: I absolutely LOVED the "poop" and "unclog your colon" covers. I felt they nailed the USP right on the head.

 

I thought the yogurt cover was a solid test since most people think yogurt contains acidophilus and other good stuff for your digestion.

 

We almost didn't test cover #5. Both my client and I worried that the message was too vague.

 

The "Why suffer" cover was ok but no one was shouting its praises either.

 

The winner?

 

Well, let me say this: If we only tested my favorite 2 cover tests ( #1 and #3), my package would've lost. Both of those covers barely broke even!

 

If I had put all my money on the yogurt cover - I would've lost even MORE money! This cover didn't break even.

 

The undisputable - and KICK BUTT winner - was the boring #5 -  "When your intestines go from..." - yep, the package we almost didn't test!

 

And the close runner-up was #4 - the "Why Suffer" cover no one was thrilled about!

 

See what I mean?

 

Sometimes, there's just no method to the madness when it comes to picking the right cover. So why take chances?

 

If you're a business owner, ask - no - DEMAND your copywriters give you several headlines to test. Then, let the market decide for you!

 

One important thing to remember: Make sure your covers look very different from each other.

 

Don't waste the opportunity by testing insignificant things or ideas. For example...

 

... You don't need to test whether a red border will be stronger than a blue border ...or whether a single word change on the headline will make a difference.

 

Focus on BIG ideas and DIFFERENT headlines that can give you a 20% or better lift in response!

 

I try to focus my cover test on a range from "safe to crazy".

 

That means I always include a safe cover - one that nails the USP of the product right on the head. This cover follows a traditional copywriting protocol I learned from Master Copywriter Gary Bencivenga:

 

Solve an urgent PROBLEM + Offer a unique PROMISE + Deliver unquestionable PROOF + Offer a user friendly PROPOSITION.

 

I also call this cover my "bread and butter" - 'cause momma needs to pay da bills!

 

Then I go to the other end of the spectrum and go for a home run approach. That's usually a crazy cover idea that defies all copywriting "rules". My goal is for the cover to either bomb - because it's just so "out there" - or "blow the roof off" - and create a surprising new twist on marketing the product!

 

And then, I create my "tweeners": cover tests #2 thru #4 (or however many additional covers I'm given). They all have different ideas, designs or whatever else I think I need to give me solid tests.

 

My clients and I have gotten some great successes with this approach - and so can you!

 

As a business owner, you can get more leverage from your sales package if you do this: Ask - oops sorry - DEMAND - your copywriter to create 2 ...3 ...even 5 different cover tests with the final copy submission. And test as many of these covers as possible!

 

Why request 5 covers when you only plan to test 1 or 2?

 

Because the optimum time to get the BEST ideas from your copywriter is while she's hot and heavy working on your project!

 

If you wait 2 or 3 months later to request cover tests, your copywriter has probably purged all that info from her brain and has to start cold.

 

Strike while she's sizzlin' hot - and you'll most likely get her best ideas! You can always test the unused covers at a later date.

 

If you focus on testing aggressively with each and every new creative idea - you'll soon discover you have several controls of the same package!

 

Not only does this type of testing make sense - it can deliver hefty cents to your bottom line!

 

Yours for stellar results,

Carline


Carline Anglade-Cole
Million-Dollar Copywriter & Consultant
carlinecole@bellsouth.net   
www.carlinecole.com

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