May 2008  Issue #1
Carline Anglade-Cole CopyStar E-Zine
Carline Anglade-Cole
Carline Anglade-Cole
Million-Dollar Copywriter
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Tah dah!  I've finally come up with a name I really like to launch this e-zine:  CopyStar - Copywriting ideas & tips for stellar response. 

Oh come on, admit it...You'd love to be a copy star, wouldn't ya? Turning in powerful copy your clients love... having your phone ring off the hook to book your schedule... and hearing "Ca-ching!" as your copy closes the sale - and dumps a boatload of money into your wallet! I sure love it!

That's what this e-zine is all about: Giving you the tools, ideas, hints, tips and whatever else it takes to get you to that next level in your copywriting career. You can do it. I'm here to help. And it won't cost you a dime! After all, this is a FREE e-zine!

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Carline Anglade-ColeO...Oh...Oprah!
Update on my new Oprah promoCarline Anglade-Cole 

Oh my goodness, the past few weeks have been nothing short of EXCITING. I turned in the 1st draft copy of my new Oprah promo. Her 3rd book is called "O's Big Book of Happiness" - and it's really awesome and inspiring.

I gotta admit... when I started writing the promo, the negative tapes in my head started to play again and I felt a little intimidated. But once I dove into the project, it just all started to come together.  I'm really happy with the draft and excited to be working with a fantastic designer named Lori Haller. As of today, we just wrapped up the first round of design.

A couple of interesting lessons I've learned working with the Oprah team:

#1: Stay within the rules. Normally I'm the first to BREAK the rules and apologize later. In fact, one of my favorite sayings is "Forgiveness is easier than permission." But not this time. Oprah's staff, her publishing team at Hearst and my client Oxmoor House have strict guidelines to abide by. For example, my copy couldn't be written in first person-which to me is ANTI-direct marketing. I couldn't put words in Oprah's mouth - I could quote her but I couldn't change her copy at all.

Plus, we had specific photos we were allowed to use. Any deviation from these rules meant rejection of copy & design. It was actually a nightmare at times, but Lori and I pulled it off and I'm really pleased with our creation. Hopefully the powers-that-be will love it too - and we can get this sucker tested in the mail soon!

#2: Turn in a final product even though it's really a draft. Normally I turn in draft copy and get crits. After copy is approved and finalized, then it's sent to design. But not for this Oprah project! O's people needed to see a "final" first draft. Meaning the copy had to be completely designed before they would review. Man, that's potentially a major pain in the butt. If they reject any significant amounts of copy-it will totally screw up the layout. Hopefully, that won't happen - but ya never know!

#3: Wait. Wait. WAIT! The review process is lengthy and tedious. Man, I hope my ADHD doesn't kick in! It will probably take about 6 months to get this project in the mail! Hopefully it'll be a WINNER! Then, it will all be worth it!  Stay tuned - you'll be the first to know when it is! 
Carline Anglade-ColeLove your mailman - he's delivering you a
daily dose of ideas and inspiration!Carline Anglade-Cole
 
I LOVE mail. I mean, I really, really LOVE getting mail! It's the best part of my day! The only reason I don't like Sundays (and even holidays) is because I don't get any mail on those days!

As a kid, I remember my mom saving all the mail addressed to "Resident" or "Occupant" for me to open.  Why do I love mail so much?
Well, here are 3 reasons...

#1: Checks! My copywriting deposits and royalty checks usually come in the mail. So sometimes, I have 2... 3... or more "paydays" a week! I have a few clients that pay by wire transfer - and I love those even more because I get paid FASTER!

#2: Ideas! No one in my family is allowed to throw out any junk mail until after I've seen it! Because what's "junk" to them is a cornucopia of brain fodder for me! I can't tell you how many times I've taken an idea from a completely different market and incorporated it in one of my health promos. So make sure you read your mail. I take time from my schedule EVERY DAY to read my mail. It's paid off in spades. I recommend you do the same!

#3: Clients! I'm on the mailing list for a boatload of health newsletter subscriptions and mail order catalogs. I know my name will be "sold" to other similar products. That way I can see who's mailing what.  A lot of times I get great leads for potential new clients. I see what their current promotion is. And if I feel I can beat it, I let them know it by contacting them directly. If I have a promotion package for a similar product, I send it to them so they can see my work. Remember: there are new companies coming on the scene every day. Get to know who they are and what they're doing. Then go after them! And that brings me to a very important issue to discuss with you...
Be careful of "control" packages in your mailbox

One of the things I encourage new copywriters to do is to read their mail and study the promotion packages they receive. That way they can see what's working in the mail - including the themes that are currently successful. But I must warn you: Not everything you get in your mailbox is a "control" [Control = a winning promotion package].

Many clients mail packages that are not profitable. Why? Here are 3 common reasons:
  • Tests: Many companies test different versions of their package. Or they test completely new packages. You may think you're reading the control, but it may just be an unproven - or even unsuccessful test panel.

  • Rigid mailing schedules: Some clients must make a decision on the success of a package test before they have the final numbers. They may only have early results to go by. But many times, those results change significantly after they've made a decision - and it's too late to change the package.

  • Inexperience. Company turnovers can have a junior level person making a serious and wrong decision about a package. For example, a few years ago, I was told my test package was lower in response rate than the control. So my package wasn't a winner. However, the junior marketer failed to realize my package brought in nearly twice as much revenue per order than the control. When her bosses finally had time to review the results, they determined my package was actually more profitable and should've been the new control. It took 2 mailing cycles for them to come to that realization. That meant the weaker package was in the mail for my client - and I lost out on potential royalty income!
Here's one way to make sure you're studying a genuine control...

Sure, it makes sense to study failed promotions. That way you can find ways to improve them. But it doesn't make sense to study a package you think is a winner when it's actually a flop!

That's why I've created a "control depot" on my website. You'll find packages that are real winners. How do I know this for a fact? Because I wrote all those suckers myself! Some of the packages are current controls that are still paying me hefty royalty fees. Others are "classics" that mailed for several years successfully. You can be certain you're putting your time and energy into studying a successful mailing. Check out over a dozen of these winners at http://www.carlinecole.com/shop/estore.htm
Carline Anglade-ColeExcerpt from my 2008 Happiness JournalCarline Anglade-Cole

One of my goals this year is to keep a happiness journal. Every day I write down one or two things that I did to make someone happy - or something that made me happy. Here's an entry I thought would be a good reminder to us all:

5/15/08: On her show, Oprah said 84% of Americans hate their jobs. Wow, I'm so glad I'm in the minority. I am really thankful for my job as a copywriter. It's the only job I've ever had that allowed me so much freedom, income, flexibility, variety and fun. I should just wash my mouth out with soap when I complain about my clients or my workload. I am in control of my work destiny and I am truly thankful for that blessing. Just this week alone, I took a mental health day off - just because I felt like it. No boss nagged me about it. Didn't have to get "permission" from anyone. I just did it. That was an awesome feeling. I have to remind myself never to take this job for granted - and I should help others experience the benefits and freedom that come with being a freelance copywriter. 
Carline Anglade-ColeTalk to me!Carline Anglade-Cole

Hey, CopyStar reader - yep, I'm talking to you! If you want to get the most out of this e-zine - I need to hear from you. Let me know what challenges you're facing with your copywriting career. If I can help - I will. But ya gotta speak up! This e-zine will only be as good as you make. So drop me an email at carlinecole@bellsouth.net  and let me know how I can help you! Until next time...
Yours for stellar results,

Carline

Carline Anglade-Cole
Million-Dollar Copywriter & Consultant

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