Mid-October 2008  Issue #11
Carline Anglade-Cole CopyStar E-Zine
Carline Anglade-Cole
Carline Anglade-Cole
Million-Dollar Copywriter
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An "eye-opening" experience...

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Which One Won? 
Which One Won?
How to Write Kick-Butt Headlines and Boost Response
 
 
How to Write Kick-Butt Copy:  Straight Talk from a Million-Dollar Copywriter 
 
Anatomy of a Kick-Butt Control
Anatomy of a Kick-Butt Control:  How to Create A Winning Promo from Start to Finish!
Here's your chance to earn a thousand bucks... create a promo for your portfolio... and get a new client - ME!
 
Hiya CopyStar,
          
I'll be honest with you. The folks who attended my Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids last month have the inside track on what I'm about to share with you.
 
But that's ok - because I've decided to open this special opportunity to ALL of my CopyStar readers - and that means YOU! Here's what I mean:
 
At the end of my first-ever Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids - the attendees were so PUMPED UP with knowledge and rarin' to put their newfound copywriting secrets to work - I offered them a job on the spot:
 
Write a landing page copy to promote "Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids - on DVD!
 
Now here's where I have to make a full disclosure:
 
Yes - I decided at the very last minute to audio and videotape the seminar. But I made NO promises to EVER offer this event on audio, video, MP3, or whatever! I may choose to do so in the future - but then again, I may not.
 
Anyhoo...
 
As a copywriter, I know the best time to write kick-butt copy is when you're motivated... excited... and hot...Hot...HOT!
 
And these folks definitely fit the bill! They uncovered all my winning secrets for writing copy...
 
... I looked over their shoulders as we worked on killer bullets...
 
... gave them "home run" headline ideas I've used successfully for over a decade... 
 
... and they learned how to turn a ho-hum testimonial into a slam dunk WINNER!
 
In other words - I had nearly 2 dozen "mini-me's" in the room - and they were ON FIRE!
 
So I decided to strike while the iron was hot and told them to write me a promo to sell the DVD version of the Boot Camp.
 
They can write the copy ANY WAY they want.  For example...
 
It can be a testimonial piece - after all THEY WERE THERE and they knew what lit THEM on fire!
 
Or they can write the promo in my voice. And I gave them full control to put words in my mouth. Also...
 
... they can offer any premiums they felt would strengthen their package...
 
... and they create their own kick-booty guarantee.
 
In other words, they had carte blanche to do the best job ever! NO holds barred!
 
Man, were they EXCITED!
What I didn't do is give these folks a deadline - but I'm changing that RIGHT NOW!

I did tell 'em to write the copy immediately - while they're still excited about their experience. That way the words will just flow and the assignment would be a piece of cake!
 
Waiting one ... two... three weeks later - means they gotta work harder to recapture the moment! Many of them heeded my counsel.
 
But now, I've got to wrap up this assignment so I can move on to a new idea that can include ALL my CopyStar readers.
 
So, Boot Camp Attendees, listen up:
 
The deadline for final submission of your landing page copy is Monday, November 17th at 11:59pm. No ifs, ands or buts about it! Because...
 
Starting on Tuesday, November 18th, I'm opening this challenge to ALL my CopyStar readers!

Now, I'll admit, if you didn't attend the Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids - you're at a slight disadvantage. After all, you weren't there to experience it for yourself. But the truth is...
 
...in REAL copywriting life - you don't always get to experience the project you're promoting firsthand anyway.
 
Most of the time you have to rely on the research the client gives you and any additional stuff you dig up on your own.
 
So, I'm offering the same challenge to you CopyStar:
 
Write me a killer landing page copy to promote Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids - on DVD. The same rules apply.
 
Create the BEST promo you can. No holds barred - but don't make ridiculous promises I can't deliver.
 
Use the Boot Camp landing page copy at: CopywritingBootCamp as part of your research kit.
 
Also, feel free to use any and all testimonials that appeared in past issues of CopyStar. You can find them at: CopyStar Ezine
 
Or you can go through past issues of The Total Package for more research info on the Boot Camp: Article Archives
 
PLEASE NOTE: This is a spec assignment - I won't be holding your hand!

While my Boot Camp attendees had me at their beck and call for their writing assignment - you don't get that privilege! So DO NOT send me "drafts" and "look overs" or "gotta a few questions" about this assignment emails.
 
Everything you need to know is in this ezine. This is a spec assignment. That means...
 
You're speculating that if you write good copy and it's accepted, then you'll get paid for your work. I'm not going to give you crits to make your copy better before you turn it in. I just don't have the time.
 
But if your spec assignment is chosen - I'll pay you $1,000 bucks, too! And...
 
... you have a real, live landing page sample for your portfolio... and...
 
...you can include me in your list of clients!
 
Your deadline:

Final submission for all spec assignments is Wednesday, December 17, 2008, 11:59pm.  After that - the offer expires! Please, only ONE spec assignment per person!
 
So, can you handle this challenge, CopyStar?
 
I think you can! Here's a little help:
 
Review what we've discussed in previous issues of CopyStar about writing killer copy: CopyStar Archives
 
 
If you need a little more kick in the pants, get my copywriting books. For example, Anatomy of a Kick-Butt Control: How to Create a Winning Promo from Start to Finish LITERALLY walks you through every step of the copywriting process: Anatomy of a Kick-Butt Control
 
Ok, that's it... so get going, CopyStar - you've got some work to do - and some serious MOOLAH to make! You can do it!
An "eye-opening" experience
 
My hunny and I decided to nix a big ole 25th anniversary party and opted to celebrate our quarter-of-a-century together in an untraditional way. We spent October 8th together and made it a day of new experiences.
 
We began our day by visiting the "Dialog in the Dark" exhibit in Atlanta. Have you seen it?
 
It's a very popular exhibit in over 22 countries and over 130 cities throughout the world. But Atlanta is the first U.S. city to showcase this amazing experience.
 
At the exhibit, you're taught how to use a cane and for over an hour - you experience what it's like to be visually impaired.  A blind tour guide takes you through normal, every day activities - and you "see" the world in a whole new way.
 
Quite honestly, it was an "eye-opening" experience for me.
 
Our guide, Derrick, showed us how to compensate for our vision loss by tuning in to our other miraculous senses.
 
I don't want to spoil the experience by giving away the specifics - because if you're planning to visit Atlanta, GA - make sure you include this exhibit as a MUST SEE (yes, pun intended).
 
In fact, here's the website address with all their info - check it out:
www.dialogtickets.com

Dialog in the Dark

Me and Mick (center) with our guides
Derrick (left) and Scean (right)

What did I learn from living in the dark?

I was so moved by this experience that I wrote an article about it and submitted to Clayton Makepeace's The Total Package. I chose The Total Package for one reason only:
 
They have over 50 TIMES more subscribers than CopyStar! I wanted to get the word out as fast as I could about this amazing exhibit.
 
I shared some powerful lessons I learned from "living in the dark" - and 3 AHA moments I uncovered that can also make you a better, stronger copywriter.
 
Click here to read the article:
TTP Article
Yours for stellar results,

Carline

Carline Anglade-Cole
Million-Dollar Copywriter & Consultant

P.S. Thanks for all the 25th anniversary wishes - and the cute E-cards! You guys are great! Mick and I had a fantabulous anniversary. We decided not to exchange any material gifts - because quite honestly, we got all the "stuff" we need. He did get me flowers - and I LOVE flowers!  However, we created some amazing memories that will have us laughing and smiling for another 25 years!
 
"Dialog in the Dark" was one of those wonderful memories. I want you to experience it too! If this exhibit is successful, the promoters plan to branch out to 6 or so other cities soon. Kansas City, MO is the next in line - debuting on November 14, 2008.  Again, check out the info on this enlightening event: www.dialogtickets.com. You won't regret it!
 
By the way, I'm not getting a dime to promote this exhibit. I just feel strongly that we all benefit when we get the opportunity to breakdown stereotypes and barriers - and walk in another person's shoes. Go see it soon: www.dialogtickets.com.


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