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Carline Anglade-Cole
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Which
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How to Write Kick-Butt Headlines and Boost
Response
How
to Write Kick-Butt Copy: Straight Talk from
a Million-Dollar Copywriter
Anatomy of a Kick-Butt Control: How to
Create A Winning Promo from Start to Finish!
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It's copywriting - not copy the
writing!
Hiya CopyStar,
I just had a long talk with one of
my clients.
Turns out he's refusing to rent his
mailing list to several other
companies. Why?
Because he's tired of finding HIS
copy in the pages of his
competitor's promotions!
Yep, his competitors are hiring
copywriters (and paying them serious
moolah!) who are doing nothing more
than COPYING from my client's
successful promotions - many of
which were written by yours truly!
Now, that sucks on many levels:
Level One: The
client is getting screwed. He's
paying a lot of money for the writer
to deliver original copy - and
getting nothing but swiped copy.
Level Two: The
original writer is getting screwed
out of royalties. After all, SHE
wrote the copy in the first place -
so SHE should get paid for it!
Level Three: The
knock-off copywriter is making money
from stealing!
Level Four: That
lousy, no good so-and-so is giving
the copywriting business a bad rap!
That just stinks!
So I thought I'd use this
issue to not only vent - but to make
sure you don't get caught up in this
racket. Because the truth is - if
you steal someone else's copy -
you're putting the nails in your own
coffin. Here's why...
This is a VERY small industry.
Copywriters talk to each other.
Designers talk to copywriters.
Business owners talk to each other.
It won't be long before you get
caught - and your career goes down
in the toilet!
Case in point - no
kidding this really happened to me!
Not too long ago, I
was reading a promo that came in the
mail. The more I read the copy, the
more it "sounded" familiar. After a
while, I could even predict what was
coming next. As I kept reading, lo
and behold - there were special
reports that I distinctly remember
creating the titles to. After a
while, I knew it wasn't a
coincidence. I looked to see who the
mailer was and it turned out to be
an old client.
So, I called the client and said,
"hey, just checking to see when I'm
going to get my royalty check."
He didn't have a clue what I was
talking about.
Then I told him about the knock-off
package. He said he was shocked. He
wanted to talk to the copywriter to
find out what the heck was going on.
Now, here's where you need a little
background info, CopyStar: The
client hired and paid me to write
the package. Due to some internal
problems, they decided to kill the
product. Six months or so later,
they fixed the problems with the
product, hired another copywriter
and gave him my original package as
"background" info.
That background info ended up on the
foreground - as the theme of the new
package - using the same premiums I
created - and lifting chunks of my
copy!
Have I used the word SUCKS lately?
Anyway, to make a long story short -
the copywriter denied lifting my
copy and said it was purely
coincidence that we came up with the
same theme. Poppycock!
Yeah, I thought about suing the
client - and even consulted a
lawyer. He felt I had a case but I
decided not to waste any more of my
time - or make the lawyer rich.
However, I did let the client know
if anyone ever asked me about his
company - I would openly share my
experience.
Turns out several copywriters - and
designers - have called me, They
knew I worked with the client and
they were considering working with
him. After I told them what happened
to me - they backed off and to my
knowledge - NONE of them accepted an
assignment from the client! And get
this...
Six months after that awful
experience, one of the client's own
employees called to offer me a job.
I simply told him I didn't work with
unethical people - and he should ask
his boss for any further
clarification. Then I kindly hung up
the phone.
So what are some lessons you can
learn from my experience, CopyStar?
LOTS! So listen up...
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Lesson #1: Study the
masters - but don't steal the copy! You
can learn a whole lot about writing
style...powerful themes...and grab 'em by the
eyeball headlines when you study controls. I
highly encourage that type of learning. In fact,
on my website, I have a Control Depot where you
can purchase real controls that are working
right now - as well as some classics that stood
the test of time: click
here!
But the point is to study them: Figure out what
makes them work. Get the feel of the copy - and
imitate the style! A copywriter who steals copy
is a soon-to-be out of work copywriter with a
bad rep! I don't want that to happen to you!
Lesson #2: Look and see what's currently
working in the market! Again, the
controls in my Control Depot are packages that
are working right now! For example, skepticism
is a huge hot button.
I think I did a great job tapping into the
skeptical market with my smokin' hot new
control: Why: CoQ10, Garlic, Lutein, Gingko,
Calcium, Bilberry, Probiotics, Vitamin C,
Magnesium, Chondroitin, Glucosamine, Low-fat
diets, Omega 3 fish oil, grape seed extract,
Blood pressure drugs, Weight-loss supplements
and Cholesterol-lowering drugs Won't Work!
(Phew! That was a mouthful, huh?)
You can see that package at:
click here! It's a great example of tapping
into the skeptical market. Read it and look for
the hot buttons I pushed. Get the gist of the
package - and then write YOUR OWN skeptical
package. You can do it!
Ok, here's another example: Testimonial leads.
Starting off your promo with a great story is an
almost guarantee that you'll snatch up your
reader's curiosity and get him salivating for
more. I did that in my package "I hope my dad's
story can save many others..." You can see it
at:
click here!
If you're struggling to understand how to write
a testimonial-driven package - that sucker is a
great example! Again, study it - trust me, it's
not hard. Soon you'll be writing YOUR OWN
testimonial package!
Plus, on my Control Depot, I've got great
examples of how to gross out your prospect (the
liver face guy)... shock your prospect with a
surprising truth (cholesterol-lowering drug
promo)... make an old product seem new (The NEW
Chelation Miracle)... and much more. If you
haven't checked out my Control Depot lately, do
it now:
click here!
Lesson #3: Don't be
lazy. You've heard the saying, "Give a
man a fish and you feed him for a day. But teach
a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime",
right?
Well, I'm here to teach you to fish. Make the
time to learn the art of copywriting. Don't get
lazy and just snatch a fish here and there.
Because guess what? One day there won't be a
person handing out fish - then whaddaya gonna
do? While I'm still in the mood to write these
ezines - let me show you how to fish. That way
you'll be fishing (and writing your own copy)
for decades to come!
Lesson #4: Respect the
industry and yourself. Make it your
goal to be known as a reputable copywriter. A
person who puts in the work to do a good job for
his clients. That way you won't have to dread
the day when you get a phone call from a client
questioning whether you wrote the copy or not
(and trust me, that day WILL come!) Your
reputation in this industry will determine if
you fizzle - or sizzle! I want you to stand the
test of time and be among the sizzlin' hot
veterans of this noble trade. The choice is
yours.
Ok, that's it -
no more lecturing!
I've got big dreams for you CopyStar - so don't
get cut at the knees by falling into the trap of
those unscrupulous writers. Learn your trade. Be
original. And write kick-butt copy that's all
YOURS! |
The Copywriting
Boot Camp on Steroids is STILL causing an
uproar!
Man, you won't believe how many calls
I've gotten to speak at private seminars in the
past week! People are hearing about the success
we had at the Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids
and these companies want me to teach their staff
how to write kick-butt copy too!
I've turned down most of the requests. Why?
Because I HAVE A JOB - I'm a copywriter,
remember? :-)
But there is one speaking engagement I did agree
to attend. And that's the annual AWAI Fast Track
to Copywriting Success Boot Camp. Those folks do
a class act. And they've invited me and Graphic
Designer Lori Haller to team up and put together
an extended version of our Oprah presentation.
If you were at the Copywriting Boot Camp on
Steroids - you know that Oprah thingy we did was
a BLAST - and now, we get to do it again! Woo
hoo!
By the way, the AWAI boot camp is officially
sold out. But Denise Ford - AWAI's seminar guru
- agreed to let my CopyStar readers get in
through "the special door".
So if you still want to attend - just call TOLL
FREE 1-866-879-2924 and let the
nice customer service representative know you're
one of Carline Anglade-Cole's CopyStar readers -
and you want in! They'll MAKE room for you - I
promise! I just love POWER, don't you?
If you want to read more about the AWAI boot
camp - just
click here!
And the attendees are STILL ON
CLOUD NINE!
I gotta share this story with you. Dan G. was
one of our Copywriting Boot Camp on Steroids
attendees - and I really picked on him. Why?
First of all, he showed up LATE to the boot
camp. The nerve!
Then he confessed that he lost his "mojo for
copywriting". A man without a mojo - how could I
resist teasing him?
And finally, it became crystal clear that Dan
lacked focus and structure in his writing.
So I got on him during the entire boot camp -
and at his private, 30-minute conversation!
Was Dan mad at
me? HARDLY! Here's what he recently wrote me...
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Hey Carline,
I enjoyed the new Copystar Ezine talking
about the bootcamp. I hope you had a few
days to rest up.
You deserve it! I
thought you might be interested in hearing
this...
Since returning home,
I'm back on my schedule of getting up early
(for me, early is 8 AM!) and writing first
thing in the morning.
To "ease back in"
without putting too much pressure I set an
initial goal of only one hour a day, every
day.
Something interesting
is happening though... After the first day,
one hour flew by... and I was actually
ENJOYING it.
I'm increasing my
writing time every day and it doesn't feel
like agony... like it was before the
bootcamp. I've started on 3 new promotions
and it's fun again.
And I think I'm
cranking out some pretty good stuff. But
I'll let you be the judge of that when I
send you my bootcamp DVD landing page
assignment. And NO... you won't have to wait
until 2012 to get it. :)
Anyhoo... just a quick
little update to let you know my motivation
wasn't just a temporary thing that died out
after the boot camp. I've actually taken
this newfound motivation and put it into
ACTION. I owe you big
THANKS for that.
All the best,
Dan
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I couldn't let Dan off the hook, so
here's what I wrote him back...
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Yeah Dan!
Now, let's set this new goal: Start working 1
hour earlier (7am) and only work on something
that will make you money during that hour. Watch
what happens!
Thanks for the update!
Carline |
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And lo and behold, I got this immediate
response:
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Great idea! I will start this tomorrow... and I
know exactly what I need to work on in that
hour.
Thanks!
Dan |
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Can't wait to see what Dan
comes up with!
And what about you CopyStar - what's holding
you back? Do you need a swift kick in the
pants like Dan? Are you still straddling the
fence deciding if copywriting is really for
you? Are you a scaredy cat? Are you
frustrated that you can't nail that first
client?
If so, keep reading the issues of CopyStar -
I just may be able to help you reach your
copywriting dreams - sooner than you think!
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Yours for stellar results,
Carline Anglade-Colebr />
Million-Dollar Copywriter & Consultant
P.S. Wow! When I
decided to GIVE AWAY my new Oprah
promotion - I didn't realize how many
folks would download it! Man, if that
promo was on my Control Depot for sale -
I would've made an easy 50 grand! Drats!
Just kidding - I really do want you to
have the Oprah promo for FREE.
If you haven't gotten your copy yet -
click here! Just so you know, when I
put Oprah on my control depot - you'll
have to pay for the promo - so get it
while it's FREE!
P.P.S: Guess what CopyStar, October 8th
is my 25th wedding anniversary! Yes, I
got married when I was 2 :-)! So I want
to take this time to give a big SMOOCH
to my hunny and inspiration Mickey Cole!
I LOOOOOVVVVEEE YOU, Mr. "Yum Yum"!
Phone: 770-554-8878
Fax: 770-554-2643
carlinecole@bellsouth.net
www.carlinecole.com
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